5th piece

I'm not done with this piece...It's my fifth and the happily ever after ending.  What do you think I should add?  I definitely need to finish their faces.

4th piece

This is my fourth piece, where Tam Lion is pulled off the horse by Janet.  Any thoughts?  I might make the background more dramatic with a darker color, like purple.  Should I add some pen and ink in the background, too?

5th + 6th pieces

Here are Leo and Virgo. I've got a few issues with them, but they turned out pretty good.

Let me know if I should fix anything.

Tess 4th piece

This is Cancer... I darkened the photo a bit because I really wanted to capture the whole

"night" quality. Unfortunately, cropping tool is on the fritz so I had to do a close-up.

This is my next piece: Frustration. My concerns with it are that she looks a bit like she is dancing and the emotion gets a little lost. Tell me if the emotion is truly coming through and if not what can I do to make that better?

Hi Guys!
Sorry to have missed yesterday but look forward to tues we will look at concentrations after the pledge etc. Please don't forget to be comments on your peers art. Try to critique a broad variety of classmates not just the few.
See you soon!
M

This is Lucy.

She is very calm, thoughtful and peaceful. She is individual and confidence.

I tried to convey these personalities through using differnt colors. 

Medium colored brown, purple and blue represent her calmness. The surrounding yellow represent her individuality. Hope it does. Oh and what a surprise, it matches up with her working place, Spendoras. 

I think the angle and face emotion show the confidence and ambition of Lucy. 

I am still not quite pleased with what I have done so far. I feel like something is missing. Her left eye didn't come out well so I am going to work on it. I kinda messed up using 2 different paints. Tempera and Acrylic. This made the painting to look bit unnatural.

Overall, the painting came out as i expected, so its good. But I def need some feedbacks in order to make Lucy happy.   

Solar System stamp

I liked the big version of this, but it didn't photograph very well...

this is chris as a giraffe. it isn't cropped great and i will end up doing a new photo in the end but any suggestions?

Lucy 3/9/10

euphoria

tired

jealousy

 Hurricane. I'm still working on it...making it less cheerful by adding grays and adding clouds/ textures. Ideas?

This is my 3rd piece, Gemini. The scene is supposed to be

very bright and sunny, so I purposely made it a little whiter than normal.

Also, the black triangle in the corner is where the paper folded down;

it is not part of the piece.

This is my finished Aries piece. 

The photo turned out a little bleached,

for which I apologize. 

Seal

this is my friends Katie as a seal! any suggestion. i like the mask but on both this and the cheetah the skin tone seems funny

this is morgan as a cheetah! :) any suggestions?

The Dirty Shirt

I'm pretty pleased with this piece, though any comments or suggestions are more than welcome!