Tuesday, March 23, 2010

This is my next piece: Frustration. My concerns with it are that she looks a bit like she is dancing and the emotion gets a little lost. Tell me if the emotion is truly coming through and if not what can I do to make that better?

2 comments:

  1. Maybe add more stress lines to her face...? She looks a little too calm. Also, peoples' muscles get tense when they are stressed or frustrated; try working in some more hard lines in her body. The proportions are excellent and I like the hair.

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  2. Eyebros hold alot of emotion! make them like this \ / with little furrow lines between them. Maybe make it look like she is gritting her teeth?

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